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October 05, 2006

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Marilyn

Positively love how you ended this! I, too, am a bounder...and a couple of days ago as the district's climate coordinator and I walked to a meeting room, using the opportunity to brainstorm on the run and on the sly, he said, "You walk so fast!" Yep, I do. Always. There's work to be done, man! :) Something tells me that when you finally make it out here and we're striding the streets of S.F. on our way to Glide, we'll have no problem keeping up with each other... ;)

twitches

I don't think I've actually ever heard the word "hoist" in a poem - it works so well. ALso love the "graffiti covered boxcars." Very cool.

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